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Time did freeze;
and so did I.
Calm and collected.
Resting and resisting.

I kept still.
Silence was key.
Until the sun rose.
I then stirred and melted.

Change, I reckon.
I am just one with abundance.
Holy crap, deviation after x number of months! Did this one just a few minutes ago. Okay, back to work. XD
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thedbldude Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
Nice and simple. I like your use of language, but if it flowed better, especially in the second stanza, the effect would be that much stronger. Good job tho =D
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counteralchemist Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks XD And I see your point with the second stanza, it only makes sense for me because I know what it's really supposed to mean. But if I look at it from the point of view of a random person, it's pretty vague. o_o
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